Fixing my Mistakes

I have made a little mistakes in my storyboard. Some of the things I did wasn't clear, and i needed to fix that. I also changed part of the story to make it flow better and not so hard to follow. I changed a whole scene in my storyboard. I made a mini sound and shooting script for those scenes. For me to use, and make it more convenient. I explained why i made the changes. Also I changed some scenes to add better camera angles, because it was basic and repetitive. I also added pictures of the actual storyboard with my side notes, of the scenes and other stuff. The pictures are to show what i changed and how much of my storyboard i changed.